Tuesday, November 8, 2016



“Phwwwww,” Bang!!” the fireworks blew, it sounded like a shotgun firing above me. As I sat in the car, Jordon opens the door to tell me to come play touch”
“Ok then” I gasped
“Come” he said
We strolled down to the beach where everyone else was playing
“Go, Kick It”
Jordon kicks it & I chase to get the ball.
When we played, the night was covering more spots in the sky, darkening the area so we couldn't see. But we still played!!.

When we stopped playing I watched the fireworks shoot up into the sky, blasting immense rainbow colors of particles around the place. Some were loud, some were faint.  

This is my writing I did to practice using more detailed words  in subjects

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