tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401591057405350171.post4318527569721228575..comments2019-03-03T15:22:45.280-08:00Comments on Alazhay's Blog: Helgen AttackBlogadminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09877318800529828508noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1401591057405350171.post-6403244553673178672016-08-30T14:50:05.273-07:002016-08-30T14:50:05.273-07:00Alazhay, I really enjoyed reading your narrative s...Alazhay, I really enjoyed reading your narrative story. You included lots of details which helped me picture what was happening in the story. I think your next step is to focus on writing in the pas tense consistently.Whaea Chrissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12619769365759134831noreply@blogger.com